I'm Liu Fang. I have a big family. There are seven people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother, my sister, my grandmother, my grandfather and me. My father is 40 years old. My mother is 41 years old. They are workers. My grandparents are 65 years old. I'm 12 years old. My brother is 10 years old. My sister is 14 years old. We are students.We are a happy family.

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A dog can run and jump.

    Ben, Mike and Joe are good friends. They go hiking on Sunday. Mike and Joe take many biscuits and kinds of fruits. Ben takes his new kite and some drink. He is very happy. They fly kites,catch butterflies and play games. They are very tired and hungry. So they have a rest and eat. At that time, a dog comes. He takes the kite and runs away. Ben runs after him. At last, Ben catches up with the dog. But the kite is broken. Ben is very sad.

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